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> <channel><title>Comments on: Creating Tonoharu #3&#8211;Writing the Script</title> <atom:link href="http://larsmartinson.com/creating-tonoharu-3-writing-the-script/feed/" rel="self" type="application/rss+xml" /><link>http://larsmartinson.com/creating-tonoharu-3-writing-the-script/</link> <description>Updated Every Few Weeks.</description> <lastBuildDate>Thu, 17 May 2012 20:26:37 +0000</lastBuildDate> <sy:updatePeriod>hourly</sy:updatePeriod> <sy:updateFrequency>1</sy:updateFrequency> <generator>http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2</generator> <item><title>By: JJ</title><link>http://larsmartinson.com/creating-tonoharu-3-writing-the-script/comment-page-1/#comment-12308</link> <dc:creator>JJ</dc:creator> <pubDate>Thu, 24 Sep 2009 06:05:44 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://larsmartinson.com/creating-tonoharu-3-writing-the-script/#comment-12308</guid> <description>Lars,Thanks a lot. Very helpful information. I guess there&#039;s no standard comic script format. And I guess I have to start working on making our script shorter. Thanks again for your posts, they&#039;re excellent and very useful.Best,</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lars,</p><p>Thanks a lot. Very helpful information. I guess there&#8217;s no standard comic script format. And I guess I have to start working on making our script shorter. Thanks again for your posts, they&#8217;re excellent and very useful.</p><p>Best,</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>By: Lars Martinson</title><link>http://larsmartinson.com/creating-tonoharu-3-writing-the-script/comment-page-1/#comment-12305</link> <dc:creator>Lars Martinson</dc:creator> <pubDate>Thu, 24 Sep 2009 04:30:34 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://larsmartinson.com/creating-tonoharu-3-writing-the-script/#comment-12305</guid> <description>Hello JJ,I’ll admit I’m not intimately familiar with screenwriting conventions, but my script was probably somewhat similar to a screenplay; it was heavy on dialogue, with brief descriptions regarding locations and actions when needed.As for how many drafts I wrote, that’s hard to say. Three or four, maybe? I revised it countless times. After I wrote the script, I laid out the pages (sort of like a storyboard) and made several changes then. Then after I finished the “final” art, I continued tweaking it. I’m still toying with different variations of how I might finish up the story even today.It’s been years since I looked at the original typed script; these days I just work from the page layout/storyboards. But if memory serves, I think it was about one script page for every ten pages of finished art. But then, the script was written in pretty dense prose, and I only have four panels per pages, so...Lars</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello JJ,</p><p>I’ll admit I’m not intimately familiar with screenwriting conventions, but my script was probably somewhat similar to a screenplay; it was heavy on dialogue, with brief descriptions regarding locations and actions when needed.</p><p>As for how many drafts I wrote, that’s hard to say. Three or four, maybe? I revised it countless times. After I wrote the script, I laid out the pages (sort of like a storyboard) and made several changes then. Then after I finished the “final” art, I continued tweaking it. I’m still toying with different variations of how I might finish up the story even today.</p><p>It’s been years since I looked at the original typed script; these days I just work from the page layout/storyboards. But if memory serves, I think it was about one script page for every ten pages of finished art. But then, the script was written in pretty dense prose, and I only have four panels per pages, so&#8230;</p><p>Lars</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>By: JJ</title><link>http://larsmartinson.com/creating-tonoharu-3-writing-the-script/comment-page-1/#comment-12280</link> <dc:creator>JJ</dc:creator> <pubDate>Wed, 23 Sep 2009 23:22:25 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://larsmartinson.com/creating-tonoharu-3-writing-the-script/#comment-12280</guid> <description>Hi Lars,Fantastic post. Did you write your script using screenwriting (film) format? How many drafts did you end up writing? How many pages of illustrations equals one script page?Best,JJ</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Lars,</p><p>Fantastic post. Did you write your script using screenwriting (film) format? How many drafts did you end up writing? How many pages of illustrations equals one script page?</p><p>Best,</p><p>JJ</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>By: Lars Martinson</title><link>http://larsmartinson.com/creating-tonoharu-3-writing-the-script/comment-page-1/#comment-73</link> <dc:creator>Lars Martinson</dc:creator> <pubDate>Thu, 29 Nov 2007 13:25:51 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://larsmartinson.com/creating-tonoharu-3-writing-the-script/#comment-73</guid> <description>Thanks for the thoughts, Patricia. Although I&#039;m putting up my response is so late that you&#039;ll probably never see it, but anyway...My method for creating comics is atypical, but if you&#039;re curious, I&#039;m going to write about how I draw comics in a future installment of the &quot;Creating Tonoharu&quot; series, which should be up early January.But if you&#039;re just starting out with drawing comics, I&#039;d say yeah, just start doodling and have fun with it. Experiment with different styles, different paper, and different pens. It&#039;ll probably take you a few years before you feel like you have any sense of what you&#039;re doing anyway (at least it did for me).Lars</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the thoughts, Patricia. Although I&#8217;m putting up my response is so late that you&#8217;ll probably never see it, but anyway&#8230;</p><p>My method for creating comics is atypical, but if you&#8217;re curious, I&#8217;m going to write about how I draw comics in a future installment of the &#8220;Creating Tonoharu&#8221; series, which should be up early January.</p><p>But if you&#8217;re just starting out with drawing comics, I&#8217;d say yeah, just start doodling and have fun with it. Experiment with different styles, different paper, and different pens. It&#8217;ll probably take you a few years before you feel like you have any sense of what you&#8217;re doing anyway (at least it did for me).</p><p>Lars</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>By: Patricia Lee</title><link>http://larsmartinson.com/creating-tonoharu-3-writing-the-script/comment-page-1/#comment-63</link> <dc:creator>Patricia Lee</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 18 Nov 2007 09:07:29 +0000</pubDate> <guid isPermaLink="false">http://larsmartinson.com/creating-tonoharu-3-writing-the-script/#comment-63</guid> <description>I think the graphic novel is THE new medium. I&#039;ve always loved children&#039;s books and today we are so used to being communicated to with visual texts like advertisements it seems natural that the comic medium is taken to a new level of sophistication. I want to start one too. I have already written six novels .. the usual sort. Do you have any tips for the size of paper to use, the type of pens that work best? Do you make the drawings the same size as they will be published for example? I agree the story has to be absolutely fabulous. I guess I will start with that first. Or maybe I should just doodle some comic strips? ok, too many questions. All the best with Tonoharu.. I will look for it in the shops.
Cheers</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think the graphic novel is THE new medium. I&#8217;ve always loved children&#8217;s books and today we are so used to being communicated to with visual texts like advertisements it seems natural that the comic medium is taken to a new level of sophistication. I want to start one too. I have already written six novels .. the usual sort. Do you have any tips for the size of paper to use, the type of pens that work best? Do you make the drawings the same size as they will be published for example? I agree the story has to be absolutely fabulous. I guess I will start with that first. Or maybe I should just doodle some comic strips? ok, too many questions. All the best with Tonoharu.. I will look for it in the shops.<br /> Cheers</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> </channel> </rss>
