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	<title>Comments on: Creating Tonoharu #10–Final Edits</title>
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		<title>By: Lars Martinson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lars Martinson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Dec 2009 02:21:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks! Yeah, Tonoharu brings out my OCD tendencies for sure. Once Tonoharu is done, I&#039;m going to try my hand at a looser, quicker style; drawing in the Tonoharu style just takes too damn long.

Checked out your website btw; good stuff!
Lars</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks! Yeah, Tonoharu brings out my OCD tendencies for sure. Once Tonoharu is done, I&#8217;m going to try my hand at a looser, quicker style; drawing in the Tonoharu style just takes too damn long.</p>
<p>Checked out your website btw; good stuff!<br />
Lars</p>
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		<title>By: Mike T</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mike T</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Dec 2009 22:19:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I found your website through the JetWit website and I really enjoyed your blog and the walthrough of your process in creating your comic. I think you might have some kind of OCD to work on something with the level of detail and care that you have :-)   Good luck with everything.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I found your website through the JetWit website and I really enjoyed your blog and the walthrough of your process in creating your comic. I think you might have some kind of OCD to work on something with the level of detail and care that you have :-)   Good luck with everything.</p>
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		<title>By: Patrick Reynolds</title>
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		<dc:creator>Patrick Reynolds</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 13 Oct 2008 20:10:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for doing this. I&#039;ve enjoyed learning. With stories, I keep thinking that the best tales guide the imagination and don&#039;t always need, or get, too much &#039;page viewing&#039; time - they carry the reader, if it&#039;s working, and the imagery will stick in the mind for long, long after. And, on your first graphic novel - congratulations!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for doing this. I&#8217;ve enjoyed learning. With stories, I keep thinking that the best tales guide the imagination and don&#8217;t always need, or get, too much &#8216;page viewing&#8217; time &#8211; they carry the reader, if it&#8217;s working, and the imagery will stick in the mind for long, long after. And, on your first graphic novel &#8211; congratulations!</p>
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		<title>By: Lars Martinson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lars Martinson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Jun 2008 09:23:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Heya Al,

Thanks for the comment. Glad you enjoyed the series.

I have mixed feelings about your friend&#039;s quick read-through. On one hand, I strived to improve readability as I made my edits, so I think it&#039;s great that it can be read through with such ease, without the super-detailed drawings becoming intrusive &amp; distracting. 

On the other hand, it is sort of a bummer to think that four years of work can be zipped through so quickly. The first panel on page 43 (of a busy train station, for those that don&#039;t have the book) took me three days to draw, but is probably looked at by the average reader for literally less than a second. But that&#039;s the way it goes. Chris Ware once said that the ratio between time depicted in a comic and the time it takes to create it is 4000 to 1. If anything, I&#039;m starting to think that&#039;s an understatement!

On a side note, while I did try to make Tonoharu a book that could be read through quickly &amp; easily, I also put in details that I hope would reward more careful readings. The prologue in particular offers many hints of what&#039;s to come.

Lars</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Heya Al,</p>
<p>Thanks for the comment. Glad you enjoyed the series.</p>
<p>I have mixed feelings about your friend&#8217;s quick read-through. On one hand, I strived to improve readability as I made my edits, so I think it&#8217;s great that it can be read through with such ease, without the super-detailed drawings becoming intrusive &#038; distracting. </p>
<p>On the other hand, it is sort of a bummer to think that four years of work can be zipped through so quickly. The first panel on page 43 (of a busy train station, for those that don&#8217;t have the book) took me three days to draw, but is probably looked at by the average reader for literally less than a second. But that&#8217;s the way it goes. Chris Ware once said that the ratio between time depicted in a comic and the time it takes to create it is 4000 to 1. If anything, I&#8217;m starting to think that&#8217;s an understatement!</p>
<p>On a side note, while I did try to make Tonoharu a book that could be read through quickly &#038; easily, I also put in details that I hope would reward more careful readings. The prologue in particular offers many hints of what&#8217;s to come.</p>
<p>Lars</p>
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		<title>By: Al</title>
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		<dc:creator>Al</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Jun 2008 13:21:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow. That&#039;s a lot of work. As someone who occasionally spends hours cleaning up an image in photoshop, I can sort of relate.

This series was really cool. It&#039;s never a bad thing to understand how much work goes into a project.

This is probably going to crush your soul a little bit, but a friend of mine (one who isn&#039;t accustomed to reading graphic novels) read through Tonoharu Part 1 in about 15 minutes. I couldn&#039;t believe it.

I think a series like this, where you explain the process of creation, helps foster an appreciation for the art form. After reading this series, I realize that I probably also read Tonaharu too fast.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow. That&#8217;s a lot of work. As someone who occasionally spends hours cleaning up an image in photoshop, I can sort of relate.</p>
<p>This series was really cool. It&#8217;s never a bad thing to understand how much work goes into a project.</p>
<p>This is probably going to crush your soul a little bit, but a friend of mine (one who isn&#8217;t accustomed to reading graphic novels) read through Tonoharu Part 1 in about 15 minutes. I couldn&#8217;t believe it.</p>
<p>I think a series like this, where you explain the process of creation, helps foster an appreciation for the art form. After reading this series, I realize that I probably also read Tonaharu too fast.</p>
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